Monday 5 September 2011

Pitch

1 comment:

  1. excellent work but i have a number of action point
    1, narrative/story - be careful not to attempt to include too much - you have an in depth and complex content outlined in 'the story' section - i think there is far too much here - be careful - it is good to have the concept of the whole production in your head BUT the teaser should do that - TEASE and not reveal too much - think of it as a film version of burlesque - teasing without revealing too much
    2. sound - you CANNOT use a classic track without ensuring that you have addressed copyright - mke sure that you do that and clearly record the evidence in your blog
    3. be careful not to make final decisions too soon and miss out marks to be gained by exploring and experimenting
    action;
    i would add to each post on the prezi a summary of your next steps - e.g. for location "next i am going to deconstruct a range of stills to identify the style and lighting of locations i admire and want to use. i will then need to search for inspirational locations that i can use for filming purposes and establish whether i need permission.
    or
    sound - i need to investigate the following in more depth; copyright laws, foleying techniques, creating a wild track, potential narration techniques
    these bullet points will then form the next posts for your blog as well as gadgets to be added to the side of the blog

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